Blackrose

You know it doesn't look too bad. The lines look a little bit unsure though. Solid smooth lines, don't be hesitant with putting pencil to paper. Be confident in your work. An Maybe next time, try a different shading style, like the circle blend technique cause smearing/smudging can be a tad messy for parts of the picture that are not intended to be shaded.

But its a nice piece, scanner problems aside, and you show some good promise. Keep up the good work.